Monday, January 23, 2012

Guest Author Jo A. Hiestand


Today, I welcome Jo A. Hiestand to
Immortyl Revolution!  Jo is a fellow L&L Dreamspell author, who writes mysteries.
Jo has found a cool way of promoting books with character trading cards.  I'll let Jo tell you all about the interesting dilemma this presents to the author.









Face Value

I wonder if other writers have as much trouble with defining character as I’m currently having. Not the character’s personality, but his looks.

To give you a bit of background in case you don’t know my work, I write two English mystery series: Taylor & Graham features detectives from the Derbyshire Constabulary CID. The new series, the McLaren Case Mysteries, deals with ex-police detective Michael McLaren, who now investigates cold cases on his own.
When I began both series I had vague ideas of what my characters look like. And now that’s the problem: vague.



Normally this minute character definition wouldn’t be a concern, but I'm venturing into untried waters. I know how hot Trading Cards are in the romance readers market, so I'm trying them for mystery readers. Just designed my first batch for "A Well Dressed Corpse," Taylor & Graham’s eighth novel.

The design part wasn't that hard -- book cover on the card's front, then character photo and info on the back of each of the character's cards. And that was the problem. I have no idea what each character looks like. Well, that's not exactly true. I know Graham is 6'3" tall, has auburn hair that is starting to gray, and has green eyes. I know Brenna has coppery colored hair and is a bit overweight. I know Mark has dark hair and eyes, that Margo is a brunette beauty, and that Scott has green eyes, is 6' tall and has dark hair. But that's it. That's all I thought I needed in my mind's eye when I created them. Now I find myself looking at literally thousands of photos of faces, trying to choose a realistic representation of Graham, Brenna, Mark, Margo and Scott.

I had to take breaks from the task. After about 30 minutes of gazing, the faces all kind of blurred together. Sure, I wrote down things like "businessman portrait in dark suit and striped blue tie, page 84," but getting back to each page for a refresher look was difficult, as the photo site had no "go to ___" button, so I had to hit the page buttons and back up that way. Took a while.

After a bit, probably at my third photo website, I got smart and did a screen capture of the thumbnail sketch. These sit on my computer screen and I can remember who the contestants are. Don't worry, I'm not stealing them without paying. The photos have lovely white X's through the center of each, ensuring folks can't pilfer them. But they're a good visual aid in my quest for the Perfect Face.

Graham was kind of easy to find: male model/lead actor handsome. I found several guys who could be Graham, so I just chose one. After all, everyone has his/her own idea of how a character looks, so my choice might not necessarily be Susie Sudsworth's choice or Tom Brown's choice. But the essence of the personality has to show through in the face, I think.

Brenna, too, I found rather quickly. But I'm stuck on Jamie.
Jamie isn't with Graham's Team. Jamie belongs to the McLaren Case series. Obviously, those who are visitors to my author website http://www.mclarencases.com/ know I have already found a real life Michael McLaren and Dena Ellison, who pose for photos that I can use. But I don't have a real life Jamie, so I had to go online to the photo sites to find him.

Man, I am stymied. I have no idea what he looks like other than he has light brown hair and has a slight build. That's it. So perhaps you see my dilemma -- I have looked at thousands of photos, seen guys ranging from muscular to beer bellied, full head of hair to bald. I don't know who Jamie is. Is he the serious guy with close-cropped hair, leather jacket and sunglasses, or is it the casually dressed man with a full head of hair? A typical no-nonsense guy reminiscent of 1970s TV cops, or a cheerful businessman? Gaunt, long face or rounder?

I thought staring at their photos on my computer monitor would help. But I have seven contestants staring back at me, and they're all different looking. I know my dilemma comes from not having Jamie's likeness in my mind. But I don't have McLaren or Graham or Mark in my mind, either, and they weren't nearly as difficult to cull from the sea of faces. Maybe it's because I've written about Jamie only three times, whereas I've written about Graham and Mark nine times. And they appear more often than Jamie does.

It's not easy choosing him from the candidates. I have an idea what a casting director must go through: photo after photo after photo of guys vying for the same role. But it isn't a personal insult if you're not chosen. I know that now. It's just that maybe Candidate 4,309 looks slightly better for the role than you do.

There's no rush in finding Jamie. I will do the first McLaren set of trading cards in a few months. But I'm the kind of person who likes to have everything thought out and prepared. (Yes, I have food, medical supplies and a small tent in readiness for the earthquake that's going to hit the St Louis region, which is where I live.)
I hope my readers like these trading cards, to collect and to trade with other readers. I had a grand time creating the set for each book. If these are popular, I think the next set will have a riddle or contest clue on the back of each character's card. I want to offer something different with each set...provided they progress that far. But I guess it’ll depend, in part, on my character.

So, what have I learned from all this? I need to know more than my character’s personality; I need to know what he really looks like. Maybe finally putting a face with the other things I know about him will nudge me into writing a better character. We’ll see.

 You can follow Jo at these links:
Jo's Website
Facebook Fan Page
Jo's Amazon Page

Jo, thanks for being my guest today! My bad boy Cedric is clamoring for his own trading card now. See what you started, Jo?







Monday, January 2, 2012

Guest Gary Wedlund Offers Writing Tips

Happy New Year!  Yes, I've been absent for about a month.  The holidays are a time for family, and I've been kicking back from the blog for a bit.  2012 has me busy working with my editor, Cindy Davis, on the fourth Immortyl Revolution book.  I've also been working on a short story anthology featuring Mia, Kurt and Cedric that I hope to release concurrently as a free ebook download.  Keep posted for details.  I have a handful of other projects in the works that I'm putting through my crit groups.  Which brings me to today's guest.  I'm pleased to welcome my friend and mentor, Gary Wedlund, to the blog.  He's pictured here with his lovely wife, Karen.



Gary is a very talented writer of fantasy and horror. I asked him to share a few tidbits of wisdom with my readers. Because of my acting background, I'm a big fan of strong verbs. I like to call them, "sexy verbs". Connotative meaning can really sharpen a writer's work. So here is Gary with his advice on strong, concise language:

A Lesson in Style

Gary Wedlund

They moved through the forest at a fast pace.


The fact is, there’s no obvious reason why I dislike that line so much, but I do. The grammar’s okay. Maybe it’s because it’s generic and leaves me with a huge shrug.

Sometimes you want to be quick and general, but usually not so much. Words like moved and pace just don’t conjure anything specific. Not only are they vague, but they double down on the same vague thought; what’s with that? Why nonspecific twice?

Next, I’m noticing how the vague references to fast movement are interrupted by a forest. The rude forest that breaks the same thought into two islands is also vague.

The mini-lesson here is to show us something. At the very least, don’t get cute with language when the content isn’t really all that special. Basically, they jogged through the forest. If you’re not going to say anything we can touch, taste or feel, get it over with.

Gary's published novels:
Living Dead Press: Zombies in Our Hometown


Open Casket Press: Atomic Zombies


Loconeal Press: Shaman Within


Loconeal Press (later this winter): Search for the Queen

Gary says: I'm primarily focused on novels, and write in three genres, zombie horror, historic fantasy and urban fantasy. I have several unpublished novels, including the last three novels to the Shaman Within (Abi) series, an urban fantasy trilogy about a succubus and her vampire sister, a two book humorous series about Satan's daughter (trying to find her mother while making sense of Earth), and a steampunk novel about a girl trying to keep out of the way of a royal mess.

I am also involved with four writer's groups, NCSF, Ohio Writers, Columbus Writeshop and Ohio Writer's Guild. One of the members sharing space and comments in two of those groups is my good friend, Denise Verrico. Gary, Denise and Ren Garcia have formed Free Writing Workshops of Ohio to foster the craft of writing by offering free writing workshops to youth and adults at libraries and schools throughout Ohio.






You can follow Gary and his work at these links:


Web page: http://garywedlund.webs.com/index.htm


Loconeal Writer's Tips Editor: ttp://loconeal.com/author/gary3538/

Editing for Living Dead Press: http://www.livingdeadpress.com/


Gary's short stories can be found in the following:

Zombie Erotica:


Sunday, December 4, 2011

Spec the Halls Anthology Raises Money for Charity

Today, Steven Saus is here to tell you about an exciting holiday anthology that is raising money for Heifer International, an organization that helps struggling families all over the world help themselves with a gift of livestock. Please read what Steven has to say and follow the link to purchase some wonderful stories and support a good cause!






My name is Steven Saus; I'm an author and publisher. I run Alliteration Ink, where I both publish original work and also provide publishing services. This year, I've taken up the mantle of running Spec The Halls from Abra Staffin-Wiebe. There's both a writing contest and a charity fundraiser. Right now, I'm doing a bit of a blog tour to support the fundraiser; each entry talks about something different, so you'll want to stop by them all. You can see a full linklist of the guest posts at specthehalls.tumblr.com and read more about the whole project (and get the charity eBook) at specthehalls.com.

Although I've spent a lot of time focusing on - and promoting - the charity aspect of Spec The Halls, it didn't start that way.


Originally, Spec The Halls was a contest with the aim of encouraging more speculative fiction, especially that based on and around the winter holidays. That is how I first came into contact with it, when Abra Staffin-Weibe was at the helm. I think it's really important to keep that part of Spec The Halls going, especially with the addition of the charity eBook.


Selected entries from this year's contest will form the core of next year's eBook. So not only will entrants get wonderful karma from sharing great fiction with the public and the chance to win cash prizes, but they will also have the chance to get a publishing credit and help with the charity next year.


Entries will be judged by crack teams of professional authors and editors, so you'll also have the chance for your work to come to their attention as well. All around, there's no reason not to enter!



This year's edition of Spec The Halls is only available for a limited time, so act quickly to get your copy!

Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Guest Ami Blackwelder Giveaway

Welcome back Ami Blackwelder! 

Contest!
Ami has graciously offered an ecopy of  her book The Invasion of 2020 to one lucky commenter!  Winner will be chosen by random drawing.  Deadline to enter is 11/20/11 at 11:59 PM. 



Ami has shared some of her experiences with self-publishing.  

Is Self-Publishing right for you?




Look at me. My Shifter Evolutions saga is on the shelf at Barnes n Noble in Tampa! Want it in your BnN? Just ask at the front desk and they can order the book for you!

What route I chose and why:


I began writing fiction novels at the start of 2009. I wrote short stories, poetry and non-fiction before that time. After completing my first novel The Gate of Lake Forest I pursued epublishing and found an epublisher, www.ireadiwrite.com, with Michelle. She accepted me and took my sequel novel Prisoners of Pride as well. I then wrote my first historical romance title The Day the Flowers Died and submitted it to Whiskey Press. They accepted it. But at that time, I was really looking into self-publishing and noticed a trend in that direction with many writers, good writers, successful writers. After learning a lot from Michelle, I decided to go my own route and said no to Whiskey Press.


I discovered something all writers should know!


Epublishers, small publishers, indie publishers cannot do anything for your brand and your novel that you cannot do better. With minimal promos, they will take at least 50% of your profits.

I don't sign with publishers now unless they offer non-exclusive rights, so that I may publish/distribute with whomever and wherever I wish. The only exception to this rule is if you are accepted by a BIG-House-Publisher who is also willing to put Money behind the Promos for your book. Which usually means you need an agent.

If you can get an agent-great! Make sure they get you a good deal with a big publisher who has the vision you have so they see the potential and are willing to money where their mouth is.


Otherwise, do it yourself! You can learn!! You will have total creative freedom, get to work intimately with an editor you chose, chose the cover design you want, distribute to where you want, and get all the profits while having the ability to distribute the book as soon as you want as well as stop distribution and make changes whenever you want. No such luck with a publisher.

So, make sure you pay attention to how much you are giving up in exchange to how much you are getting before you sign the dotted line.



That is What and Why. Perhaps many of you are asking...HOW?
Tips:

Find a good editor or two! Find an illustrator or graphic artist!
Createspace.com


Lulu.com (ipad)


dtp.amazon


pubit.com

Promote on a few sites you've researched and like and build your loyal base of fans from there.
Get a website on blogger, or wordpress or weebly (all for free).


Have a presence online on twitter, facebook, kindle and nook forums and pick a few more forums you like related to your book genres.

Build a fan base in your local area with distribution of your books to schools, universities, libraries, and book events everywhere! Ask and you'll be surprised how many say "yes" !




Learn more on my website: http://amiblackwelder.blogspot.com
every Sunday!